WOW!! That was quite a story, I couldn't put it down until I finished. At first I thought it was her grandad, than I thought the maids boyfriend. You did an exceptional great work and as usual you never cease to amaze me. Hope you make many sales. It was interesting, exciting and well written, and could not put it down until I had finished. An excellent read for anyone who enjoys reading, :-)
Eleanor Lambert, Bermuda.